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Naruto Generation III Pt.84 by ~Ultamia:iconUltamia:



Naruto Generation III
By: Nancy Chhor aka Ultamia

Chapter 84~

      " T-T-Thats Zeshin?!" Kya squeaked as she clinged herself all over Hitachi, Hitachi didn't say anything obviously upset of the AIII Leader who would do something too low for a pity fool. He also could not hide his anger any longer as wrinkles appeared on his forehead. His one Nightmare Glare eye glowed and grew even more bigger as it was as if it was to explode or infected his face like some type of virus as he held Kya's wrist too tight she felt it was going to snap as a single tear never dripped down from her lashes as she held back and let out a whimper, " H-Hitachi....owe..", Hitachi release his grip a little he was getting very mad at what Zeshin was attempting to do, his right arm started to twisted around like an electric drill by itself and it made a bone-breaking noise when it twisted into that long black blade with the silver edgings danced the tip of it. He was prepared to raise some bloody-ass battle here and now, he wouldn't let it all go without vengenace and a fight as he snarled, fangs started to protruded out of his mouth and black veins circulated his brown scar as Kya feared that expression. Zeshin stood there unamused at all as he let out a chuckle, " do you really think that Nightmare Glare of yours is going to work out?" he smirked as he stood up but didn't move, Hitachi didn't said anything as he whispered to Kya, never turning to face her, " Kya avert your eyes from mines.." he cracked his knuckles slightly as Kya squeaked as she saw both of his eyes started to containminated more often, and quickly understood as she exit out of the way. Zeshin didn't bother to pursuit her as he watched her leave before smirking back at Hitachi, " so..its just us two than?". A dark-red blade started to dripped out of his sleeve, and pulled to the front of his chest as Zeshin's tongue reddened as he licked the sheen of the entire weapon, " so you got one too hmm?" another sneer ripped across his lips, " the Final Keys to open up the Forbidden Bijuu...that is...". Hitachi's eyes slanted coldy, " and what of it? I'm not letting you take it that easy..", Zeshin's shoulder fell and relaxed, " ah, so desu ka? I like to see bent down on your knees like a dog...again...like many years ago!" he let out a laugh of cruel mockery angering Hitachi even more as Hitachi's pale skin fractured to beet red, but he continued to remain silent and still. Zeshin continued as his silver swirling eyes activated his kekkai genkai, " Although we, AIII are looking out for the other Basic Keys that is from major village like Suna and Sight along with Mist. There is the Final Keys, the Final blades of our ancestrol ancestors....I think you know the rest of the old tale" he sniggered.
         Hitachi's eyes started to release and become filled with relieve for a minute, " I thought it was all just a legend that there was no such thing as a Ten-tailed Bijuu..I thought the Hokage Kitsune Uzamaki has the Ten-tail..." Zeshin quickly added in, " I'm afraid not, its just another Nine Tail pup with a deformation from its birth that is all.". Hitachi tilted his head up a bit, " I see...so Final Blades are somewhere in this world...unknown of its whereabouts eh?". Zeshin nodded, " sharp minded you are! And..." his eyes targeted Hitachi's new blade that is known by its source to be the Final Blades to open the Forbidden Bijuu, " since your little whore, Sabaku no Kya is gone....I think I'm good enough as the usual to beat you again!" he let out a laugh as he jumped into the air, raising his blade high as his eyes flickered widely open, " say good bye...you little insolent creature!" he snarled. Hitachi was sent tackling down to the ground and pieces of the floor broke off only a small bit as the back of his head hit the wooden panes between the shutters and the agony rang deep into his head, " ah!" he let out a yelp as Zeshin rudely grabbed hold of his messy, dirty hair and reeled Hitachi in like a fish, before Hitachi's jaw connected with his opponent's fist slamming him back onto the ground again but couldn't only to be wrenched aside as Hitachi swore he felt a shooting pain coming from his neck, " fuck!" he roared as he spat out a back tooth in his mouth and little spad of blood flew out. Zeshin ran his reddened Final Blade into Hitachi's gut and enjoyed hearing the ripping flesh and the snapping sound of bones broke through, " haha!" as he watched Hitachi's face contorted in so much pain. Zeshin than use his kneecap to knocked Hitachi back across the room, furnitures reeled over and destroyed as the two Akatsuki leaders ditched this out. Hitachi got back to his feet, his body trembling from pain he had gotten weaker from the past years since he was nothing but a low-life captive. The black blade ripped open again as Hitachi brought it in front of his face to keep his opponent away from his feature, off bay at least. " Pathetic Uchiha! All you care is nothing but power...POWER!" Zeshin roared as his orange mane flied back as both of the leaders broke through the room's wall and rubbles were made.
           Hitachi tried to use Nightmare Glare again but Zeshin's eyes were like some reflection. As if Hitachi was a baslisk creature or Medusa and only to have his attack reflect back by its own from a certain mirror. A mirror like Zeshin's eyes. Hitachi felt the pain shot from his whole entire nervous system once more as he get the taste of his own medicine. He quickly disactivated Nightmare Glare knowing it would not work at all anymore, his trump card had failed. Hitachi instead activated Sharingan on and blew out his Grand Fireball Jutsu squarely at Zeshin's face, Zeshin leapt off of Hitachi as he brushed his face covering in black soots from the Grand Fireball techinque. He coughed once or twice before sneering back again, " is this all you can do?" another cockiness tone came from his throat. Hitachi returned back on his feet again, sweating like a wild pig as he smiled back, " ....maybe!" as he come forward at Zeshin. Ryou, Kazuma, Kuniko, Kiane, and Kya came as audience to the scenary of the battle as Ryou felt relieve once he saw his father and shouted for him, " Dad!". Hitachi didn't want to be distracted nor getting his loved ones in danger as he shot back a look, " everyone back away now!" before Zeshin's blade grazed him across the cheek, " gah!" almost missing him by the point of chucking his eye out. Hitachi cupped his cheeks feeling the burning feeling shooting upon him like crazy at the same time as his kidney wound, he was getting his ass beat up very badly again. But not all of the time his battle end up in victory. He knew that and wasn't that stupid nor cocky to get what he wants. Zeshin and Hitachi clashed their Final Blades upon each other as Hitachi gritted his teeth, his knee buckling and he didn't know how much he can go anylonger as Zeshin struggled to push him back, making a small hill of soil underneath their foot, " I'll make sure....you wish to die again!". Hitachi sneered a bit, of course he felt pain throughout his entire body no matter how many times he endured battles but at least there was a point to his living that he cannot die until he made sure his loved ones were safe, always safe thats what he wanted to do, put himself in the front line, " Mother---!" as Hitachi's other hand engulfed with black flames punched Zeshin solely into the stomach as well. Both of them retreated to a safer distant, catching their own breath but mainly Hitachi was the one who needed to take a breather. Zeshin licked the blood off of the blade, but never revealed a hint of insanity or blood lust, " you taste good...I like that!" he chuckled before disappearing into a orange blur, " and I want more!" he said that right behind Hitachi, his breath hitting him behind the neck, making his hair stand up. Hitachi's body lurched violently forward as if he was waiting to puke out all his food but he only puked out a waterfall of blood instead when Zeshin drove not only the red Final Blade, but also his entire arm...both of his arm actually puncturing right through the stomach, the lung with its air sac, and almost close to the throat as Zeshin dragged his weapon and other limb upward trying to captivated Hitachi into two pieces. Kya could not watch this as she felt like fainting as she cried out tears, " stop! Stop this! Please don't kill him!". In response to her cry, Ryou leapt forward so did Kuniko and Kazuma not so far behind.
              Meanwhile, admist from the battle taken place in the Hyuuga's Royal Garden and ontop of the huge platformed wall surrounding Konaha. Nobusuke was watching and not even caring of his sibling, Hitachi if he died or not in the hands of Zeshin as he looked over the women's public hotsprings with a small binocular of his while he sat and a empty notebook stretched out on his lap with a feathery inked pen ready to be drawn on the empty, fresh parchment. Nobusuke's cheeks were reddened as he watched the Konaha females all alike citzens or shinobis, whatever tooked a bath in the popular waterworks. Nobusuke's ears picked up a sound coming from below as he thought at first, the Patrols had caught him red handed for he was an outsider although his Father, was born in Konaha but anyway Nobusuke was a different story. Nobusuke dropped all his belongs into a small bag while he carried the huge scroll on his back before he looked down for a few moment and realized that they are no Patrollers at all. Instead he caught sight of a blonde kunochi wearing pink tight-skin clothing will little steel pads, heading to the direction where Sabaku no Kyoji had left just quite a while ago. ' Jun..' Nobusuke thought to himself to be affirmtive, he and Kyoji were only here in Konaha just to drop off Kya, Kuniko and Kiane in Konaha to where they belonged. But Kyoji decided to not stay around for he found it quite boring and Nobusuke was the opposite for he was prepared to write another volume of the new Icha Icha Paradise book, a tribute to his teacher Jiraya. Nobusuke leapt down onto the ground as his soles touched the grass he bursted into piles of leaves being picked up by the wind. Than reappeared right in front of Kyoji's former teammate, Jun. The blonde almost freaked out in surprise when Nobusuke popped out of thin air and only a few green leaves fallen in front of his feet while Jun fell on her bottoms...almost but yet not quite. Nobusuke quickly grabbed hold of her arm before pulling her back up as he had a huge grin on his face, " what are you doing here Jun?!". Jun slapped her bottom to get rid of any material attached onto her as she looked back, " what else?" as Nobusuke's eyes almost filled with adoration as he hugged her tightly as if she's a stuffed bear and not realizing at that moment of the hug he was suffocating her, " awww you're so sweet, you came to see me! I missed you Jun-chan!" he rubbed his cheeks against her as Jun laughed a little before her voice became bitter and cold as she escaped from his grasp, " no...I came to go after Kyoji to avenge Toyo remember?!". Nobusuke's smile faded as he gave her the super sad puppy eyes, " awwww....". Jun couldn't keep up with the straight face anymore as she burst off laughing before hugging him back, " actually I came to see you as well!". Nobusuke smiled as he rewrapped his arm around her, " haha you got me on that one!" before pulling away to looked her face completely, " so hows the little squirt coming along?!" he smiled.
          Jun giggled, " oh you mean our son? Junnosuke?" she looked around to make sure no one heard about this as her eyes dimmed as her voice lowered its volume down, " ....he's good I'm just happy that I have a special someone to hide him away from Kyoji...you know him...". She looked back up into his eyes, " you know how jealous and angry he can be...but he's an idiot too...he should know that I'll never forgive him...". Nobusuke nodded before whispering back, " I'm glad that the little squirt is alright, he is our precious little treasure right Jun?". Jun smiled brightly as she giggled and rested her head on his chest to feel his heartbeat once more, " yeah really really gla---!" a pause as Nobusuke heard shifting noise from behind them, " oh...dang it...." he was about to turn to meet what he think he was going to meet, " Hey Kyoji I was----wait----!". He lost his sentence as his mouth ran dry as he met a familiar person from not so long ago who once held his heart but only to be broken down. Jun's warmth left him as she stand side to side, looking at another silver-hair kunochi with the cold blue eyes. Nobusuke picked up his jaw and locked it back in place before his eyebrows furrowed but he thought twice for unleashing his anger out a bit, he didn't expect to see her again but to see her presence kinda ticked him off because of the good ol' memories and...the very bad ones. His voice had lost the ol' jolliness that makes everyone happy when he cheered them up with a joke or his jackassery stunts to make them laugh at him. Only a bit deep touched his voice as he looked up at his ex-lover, " oh...its you, I never thought we met again...Fei-long.". Jun kept quiet as her fingers intwined with his fingers, "....that Fei-long? The one that you told me about Nobu-kun?!". Fei-long lifted her eyes at Jun and hid somewhat leftover loving feelings she once bore to this man standing right a few feet in front of her and she felt a tint of jealousy but didn't let her heart confirmed it as she brushed those feelings into the pits of her stomach, "....I see. So you manage to make it through without the need of me.." she turned her attention back at Nobusuke. Nobusuke almost glared, " I don't need you....you were the one who was using me...to get another man!" he almost wrapped his hand that was holding Jun's into a balling fist but quickly remembered as he kept the anger back as possible but Jun can sense it. Jun placed a hand on his shoulder and slide down lazily, " Calm down..Nobu". Nobusuke tried to relax a little as he let out a sigh before his purple eyes gleamed over Fei-long's blue ones, " what do you want?". Fei-long's statue expression never changed as she spoke, " Junnosuke hmm? The wannabe Paris Hilton gave birth to a peepsqueak?". Jun glared as her knuckles curled and turned white, " what did you say...you bitch?!". Fei-long laughed a little before she glared at Jun, " silence no one is talking to you. Besides how much is Nobu paying you?" Jun was going to leapt there and give Fei-long a blow on the face but Nobusuke quickly said as he held her back, " she's not a prostitute and beside she's a much better lover than you ever were!" he added, " so...I see you overheard us." while he was thinking ' I'm glad that Kyoji didn't hear the existence of me and Jun's son or else...the possiblites are almost endless'. Fei-long simply nodded as she rolled her eyes in annoyance, " no duh.....Nobusuke I didn't came here to take you back into my life unforturnatley.." she closed her eyes, " I have no reason to have you.." as Jun hissed her words through gritted teeth but Fei-long just ignored, " exactly.". Nobusuke waited but he felt impatient, " well what are you here for?!".
          Fei-long let out a sigh as she looked at Nobusuke fully in the eye and didn't have the care in the world if Jun was here to hear it all, " Nobu I'm sure you heard I have a daughter by the name of Juudo corrected?" she raised a brow. Nobusuke pondered to retrieve a memory or something, he looked back and nodded, " yeah that little psychopath with that monsterous strength of yours?". Fei-long didn't made any movement of her head, she knew that Nobusuke knew already and Jun was silent about it, " yeah what about Juudo?" he asked. Fei-long sighed as she pulled out a document with a huge black title on the front cover written " DNA Results". Nobusuke felt his heart skipped a beat when he caught the document, thrown by Fei-long, " n-no...." as Jun looked over, " what is it?" she said curiously. Nobusuke opened the document as he started to skim all through the paper as his voice got louder and louder, " N-no...no...no! NO! It can't be!" he roared as he glared almost sputtered out of words, toward Fei-long. Jun cupped her mouth as she looked to and fro at Fei-long and Nobusuke. " You're not lying are you! Are you?!" shouted Nobusuke he was absolutely filled with disbelief as Fei-long remained calm as they all looked freak out of the DNA Results as she spoke softly:
     " Yes, Nobusuke you're the Father of Juudo...".
©2008-2010 ~Ultamia
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Author's Comments

:phew: I manage to force myself to write..at least a chapter ^^; so expect to see more soon...or later
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Pt.83 [link]
Pt.85 [link]
All NARUTO character is copyright to Masashi Kishimoto
~*~ NARUTO GENERATION III CAST~*~
:iconkuraieclispe: Avalin and Jordan
:iconultamia: Tsugaru, Mizuki, Shinzo, Faith, Taiyoukai, Youkai, Yukina, Hitachi, Trinity, Ryou, Dan, Kron, Nobusuke, Ultima, Juudo, Basura, Chikane, Chiya, Shisuke, Fuwabakasu, Song Wong, Fei-long, Zeshin, Gyouso, Nobusuke, :new:Kuniko, Yukito, and Genzo
:icondahdtoudi: Shin, Kya, Maya, Chichi, Yori, Yukio, Kiane, Kyoji, Amiruro, Tsurabusu, Chifufuni, and :new: Junnosuke
:icondarkpredatorprincess: Tynan and Mitsu, Danya
:iconpred-xnentar: Hajime Sadako
:iconkaiju-z: Petruno Emori, Kazuma, Kyuuzou
:iconmissdarkshiva: Kitsune Uzamaki
:iconkatarakitty223: Akira, and Megumi
:iconartictiger: Angelina, Osiris, :new: Jeanne, Seito, and Naizen
:icontatsurachan: Hitomi, Sakumi, Hikaru, Takeo
:iconespardalegion: Tachikaze and Daisuke
:icondragonballxe: Itami
:iconcallyrose: Washi, Seishi, Janen
:iconilovegaaraxkyo: Kisuke
:iconx-sand-siblings: Meira, Aiko, Amon, Aki, Asuma, Muma, Numa, Fukaku
:iconkh2naruto: Kenji, Karuto, Koki
:iconsahoma: Seiichi Uchiha
:iconteeniegaara: Totski
And thats it.....I think..please do not get mad if I don't include you because I already have enough NG OC to write about DX

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urgh... Its Jenna not Jeanne
Great read :)

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Excellent work on this one =)

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Thanks :D

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XDD my bad sorry
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"Sorry, I got a sudden urge to hit him when I looked at his face." - Bulgaria, episode 27 of Axis Powers Hetalia
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:giggle:s I still love ya :) :cuddle:s

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Another awesome chapter :clap: More twists O_O XDD
Can't wait for more :popcorn:

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haha! sucks to be you man!
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THANKS :) and yes more twists :evillaugh: my specialty ;)

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